Thursday, 29 September 2011

Thoughts: Week 3

This week I had difficulty writing my review because I wasn’t sure how to write the plot without ruining the movie for the readers. As this was one of the comments I received. I wanted to expand what I wrote as I felt it was too short, but I didn’t really know how to. I tried to avoid babbling as this is something else I tend to do, but there’s only so many times and so many ways you can say how much you liked the movie, without it getting too much for the reader. I felt kind of better about the length of my review when I saw the review I compared it to because it was kind of short too, although not as short as mine. Writing the plots of films is something I need to work on.

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